Happy Monday 5L:)...
Today you are going to write on an experience that everybody has in this world...BIRTHDAYS...
Todays writing prompt is:
My ideal birthday party would be...
Think outside the box...be creative and let your thoughts flow freely...and have fun daydreaming about your ideal birthday party:)
Remember...I want you to write as many words or more as you did during our 10 minute writings in class:)...so everybody will be a little different
The most birthday party for me would be having a party on the beach. It would be very nice. I could invite all my friends and spend the whole day at the beach. We could all go to my house after that, and have a sleepover. Then, we could watch movies, talk all about different things and sleep very late. Or, if we can't go to the beach, we could watch movies or just hang out at my apartment. Or, the best thing would be going to America and spend a week there! That would be the best birthday ever! Especially if we go to Hawaii! Or Florida! Or I would travel to Europe! Going there would be AMAZING!!!!! :) So that would be my ideal birthday party, but I don't usually do any birthday parties...
ReplyDeleteThe ideal birthday party for me would be having a paintball party. I could invite all my friends. Afterwards, we could have a sleepover and play video games the whole night. Then, the next day, right after lunch we would eat the cake. It would be an ice cream cake from Baskin Robbins with 5 different flavors. Mint, Chocolate, Vanilla, Cookies and Cream, and Strawberry. It would be big enough to feed the whole school! Then we could go to every single amusement park in the world! That would be so cool!!!! This is what my ideal birthday party would be like.
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My ideal b-day party would be going to lotte world and just riding on all the rides with all my friends it would be so fun!!! afterwords all the girls could have a sleepover at my house and then we could all have are sleeping bags and then we could have a pillow fight have popcorn tell funny stories and then we could watch a movie and then we could go to sleep and then wake up in the morning and have pancakes!!!!!!!
ReplyDelete:D thats my ideal b-day party!!!
Davis said My favorite birth day party would be at lotte world and i could be able to invite all my friends. After all of my friends could stay at my house and have a huge cake. Then we could play video games and watch movies all night. In the morning we could go to the beach and play with the water and build sand castles. Then we could gokart race.That would be my first and favorite party with my friends.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite birthday party would be in Disney World with all my friends!!! We would be able to go on all the rides together!!! That would be really fun!!! Afterwards we would be able to have a sleepover in a disney hotel!!!We could have a pillow fight and then watch a movie. After all of us would be so tierd of the disney world day we would all be happy to go to bed.
ReplyDeleteMy ideal birthday party would be to borrow an airplane and go to the Grand Canyon with my friends. From there, we would meet a professional rock climber and learn from him how to climb the Canyon. My birthday party would be at the top of the canyon where we would eat tacos and the fresh cupcakes my mom made. On our trip coming back, we would visit Hawaii and go to the observatory to see Jupiter. We would return to Seoul and end with a sleepover at my house!
ReplyDeleteMy Ideal birtday party would be ... inviting my friends to go to Hawaii to swim/relax in the beach. And then we probably get stung by some small jellyfish... Then we can eat mexican/korean/japanese etc. food that we like and they would be free + without tax. We fly a airplane and go to Guam to go fishing and we take pictures to remember this trip. We then go to a restaurant to sell those fish and get at least something to earn. We sleep in a hotel room (which ofcourse I have to pay) and we can play video games in the hotel room. Then we watch some movies and we sleep somewhere around 12:00 AM. So we have a good night sleep and the next day we fly off to Maldives before it sinks through the ocean and becoming no land at all. We go to a musuem and there we sit at a snack bar to buy something. I buy some icecream and some chips for my friends. We rest about 2 minutes and we go back to the museum trip. We look at a 2headed turtle, some fish, sharks etc.. then we take a picture and we go sleep in another hotel room. We sleep there and the next day we pack our bags to flight back to Seoul Korea. We say buy and that will be the end of my birtday party/trip!!
ReplyDeleteMy Ideal birthday party would take place in the West Edmonton Mall, which is the largest mall in the world. From there we would go to galaxy land, which is an indoor amusement park, and go on some rides. Then I would take you to the World Water park to go on some slides and then after we have our fun, we would go to Outback steak house, where we would have our lunch, and during the night. we would go have a stay at the West Edmonton Hotel so we could spend the night there. Then we would return to Korea and we would all share good memories.
ReplyDeletethe best birthday eer would be in a pool with two giant pirate ships and we would battle. it the water and shoot water balons at each other. and try to capture the oter teams treasur and bring it back wile people would fight with water guns and toy swords. there will also be a hole in the bottom of the ship so u can thake a miniboat out to the other ship of swim in. it would be the best birthday that i could ever have.
ReplyDeleteMy ideal birthday party would be a sleepover at my house with 3 of my best friends, David and brother Josh and Craig. It would start at 6:00 and we would have pizza for dinner and play video games and then at 1:00 my dad would tell us to sleep and we pretend to sleep and then play video games quietly.
ReplyDeleteMy ideal birthday would be a huge fun fair. I would have purple elephants walking around and giving people rides. Go-carts would be riding around and people would have races to see who is fastest. Cotton-candy stands would be in every corner. I would have a gigantic swimming pool with dolphins in it. I would invite tons of people to it. I would dig a pit of sand so people could ride camels. I would have a big ball pit where people could swim in all the colorful balls. We would have a water gun fight and the guns would be huge. There would be an area where people could shoot paint balls at a target. After all that we would fly first class to disneyland and go on all of the rides. That night we would go to a concert. We would stay in the disney hotel. The next day we would fly back home and everyone would get lovely party bags. After they are gone, I would open all my 3 thousand presents.
ReplyDeleteMy ideal birthday party would be at Cedar Point. I would like it to be there because I like the rides that they have. I would invite a lot of my friends and some of my family. My favorite ride at Cedar Point is the Dragster because it goes very fast and is really cool to watch. I have never rode the Dragster before, but I am looking forward to riding it next summer or in the winter maybe. Another reason why I want to go there is because I want to ride the Gyro Spin ride. That is where and why I want my ideal birthday to be.
ReplyDeleteAt my ideal birthday party we would have a paint ball fight first then we would watch a movie then we would go to seoul land and ride this really fun roller coaster called BLACK HOLE 5 times then everybody would come to my house and we would play video games then everyody would sleepover.
ReplyDeleteMy ideal birthday would be....
ReplyDeleteFirst, going to an amusement park and riding all the scary rides like...
Atlantis, Gyro Swing, Gyro Drop, and ect. with my best friends:)
Second, go to the mall and buy stuff and presents:)
Third, i would go home and just have a sleepover and hang out with my friends until its like 3 in the morning!!
My DREAM FANTASY birthday would be to..
First, go to an amusement park that is funner and cooler than any amusement park ever!
Second, i would swim in money!! The public money swimming pool with my friends:D
Third, i would go to the mall and hang out ( a very cool mall with all my favorite stores)
and last but not least fourth.. i would go to my house and have a slumber party with all my friends and sleep really late in a dream house and get perfect presents:!!!!
MY DREAM BIRTHDAY PARTY
ReplyDeleteIf I could have any party it would be a huge pool party and I would get the best presents ever. However, no matter what I get my normal life is so satisfying. I love my family.
DREAM BIRTHDAY
ReplyDeleteIf i could do a fantasy birthday party i would have done it in the best,biggest and coolest place in the world i don't know where but i think it's going to be soooooo~ fun:D
My ideal birthday would go to Mount Everest with my friends. We would meet a climber and we will climb up the mountain.
ReplyDeleteThen, we will come back and go to seoul park and ride a cool roller coaster called Ramping Rollers that has rocks falling(but not on you).
Then we wentback to our house to play video games and a sleepover.
My ideal birthday would be going on a trip with my 3friends to all around the world!! It would be the BEST!! I would go to every continent and Evertwhere!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yay!
ReplyDeleteAfter the world trip We would borrow a mansion in Hawaii,Saipan,or Guam and play with my friends in the pool and would take pictures and play ds and stuff!Ah~ It would be the best birthday party in the world!!
My favourite party is to have my b-day in Mexico having my closer relatives soch as my grandpas,my uncles and my friends.
ReplyDeleteI like to have my party in a place call "ciudad de los niños" wich means the children city.
All my friends are going to be so fun becouse there is a great an so funny place¡¡¡¡¡
It would be the greatest party of all the parties of the world:):).